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Line Graph Sample

Line Graph Sample
The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 Topic : employment patterns in the USA

Report Plan

Paraphrase: presents>represents; employment patterns in the USA >patterns of employment in America

Overview: The given graph represents the patterns of employment in America between the time period of 1930 and 2010.

Paragraph 2: (1) Talk about the employment patterns in different sectors. Give figures.

Paragraph 3: (1) Talk about the employment patterns in different sectors. Give figures.

Paragraph 4: (1) Talk about the employment patterns in different sectors. Give figures.

Sample Answer

The given graph represents the patterns of employment in America between the time period of 1930 and 2010.

It is evident that in 1930, 75% of the American labour force got employment in farming, fishing and foresting. On the other hand, merely 10% were employed in sales and office and trade. During this time, the industrial and technical sectors comprised only 2% of the workforce. However, a gradual change can be seen in the situation over the next 20 years, except for the technical workforce as it employed threefold people.

Also, by the time 1980 entered, the American employment pattern had undergone a substantial changeWhile the number of employees in farming, fishing and foresting had declined to 40%, industrial and technical employees saw an upsurge to 13% and 10% respectively.

Likewise, the sales and office sectors didn’t increase until 1980. The most significant change can be seen in 2000 when the proportions of farming, fishing and foresting decreased to 1% while the other three significant sectors increased to more than 20% of the employment.

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سپهر عالیوند1401/06/11

in general the employment opportunity in technical, sales and office, industrial saw growth throughout the time and (farming fishing and foresting), other services decline and remained the same respectively over the period shown.

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