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People should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community

People should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community

IELTS Writing Task 2 Topic

Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Are disadvantages of this requirement greater than the benefits for the community and individuals? OR

It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?

Band 8.0 Sample Essay

Every year when summer comes around, volunteer students in their conspicuous blue shirts are ubiquitous. They can be spotted in the streets, delivering free food to the less fortunate, at waiting tables in front of the school gates providing information to students, or on the beach collecting trash under the sizzling weather. However, it still remains a topic of debate whether these activities are wholly beneficial for students.

On one side of the argument, there are a number of benefits for students who are involved in community service. In the technologically-advanced world, it is a common problem that people show scant concern about others’ affairs. These activities certainly help them gain insight into the lives of the underprivileged, realise how fortunate they are, and therefore inspire in them a higher sense of responsibility with the community. Besides, participating in volunteer programs is also a very effective way for students to combat stress and hone various crucial life skills such as communication, teamwork, or time-management.

Despite the multiple merits of volunteer activities, there are still a lot of raised eyebrows. Firstly, making unpaid work obligatory to all students without any exception will certainly cause resentment among themselves or their families. In addition, students’ studies at school can be sabotaged as they are always short of time to complete their homework or revise their lessons. The other, more profound consequence that can ensue from the constant poor academic performance is the bleak career prospects that the future hold for them.

To conclude, the importance of community service should be fully realised; however, it should not be made compulsory for all students.

Useful Expressions :

  • Show scant concern about…: Pay no interest to…
  • The underprivileged: Those who don’t have much money, possessions…
  • The sizzling weather: extremely hot weather.
  • Inspire in them higher sense of responsibility: to make them become more responsible.
  • Hone various crucial life skills: improve those skills.
  • Multiple merits: a lot of benefits.
  • There are still a lot of raised eyebrows: There are more things to be considered.
  • To be short of time: do not have enough time.
  • To cause resentment: cause anger, disagreement.
  • To sabotage (v.) to damage, destroy.
  • Ensue (v.) happen.
  • Bleak career prospects: low chance of getting a good job.

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zahra aboufazeli1401/03/24

Nowadays, it is advised that some time unpaid work should be undertaken by all the youth in order to help people in society. While, there are several pros and cons which this essay will discuss that profits outweigh drawbacks for the community. On the one hand, the principal advantage for community is that they can get served better especially in this position that more and more governments do not pay attention to welfare of society. In addition, it is a common problem that people illustrate scant concern about other's affair, so these activities certainly increase insight into the lives of the underprivileged. On top of that it would be better for improve spirit, confidence and ability of communication. On the other hand, working without money leads to provide resentment among themselves or their family. Because, financial situation in every country force individual to work hard. Furthermore, these pupils have short time to complete their homework or revise their lessons. For this reason, it causes them experience constant poor academic performance, also it brings about losing good career prospect. According to studies that have conducted all around the world, if students do not have enough time for studding and handing out with their family, they will not have prosperous life in future. In conclusion, unpaid service to the community has benefits for the community as they could be served better, and has more drawbacks for the people as they may end up losing prosperous life.

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حامد دانش1401/04/06

Every year, when the summer vacation starts and students pass all the exams, some students plan to do some volunteer jobs in their summer, such as delivering food for retirement and poor people, taking a note for illiterate people and signing some new student in their school. This activity has a lot of disadvantages and benefits for volunteers. On the one side, a student working as a volunteer has a wide variety of problems. Firstly, unless they have worked as volunteers, they don’t have any leisure time to meet their leisure activity such as playing some sports game with their friends and classmates or watching movies, secondly, the people don’t pay some money for their activity around the summer, so, some of them don’t have any motivation to finish their jobs perfectly. However, some other one addict to work as a volunteer around the year. On the other side. The benefits of this trend are a few. The volunteer work not only get any good ideas to use in their life but they also learn a skill very well without paying any money. To conclude. The number of problems and disadvantages of un-paid working is more than benefits, although community and society be must work to decrease the number of harmful effects by it.

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ندا رضوی1401/05/31

In this day and age, there are many people in every corner of the world who are unable to meet their basic needs and we cannot even imagine what problems they are dealing with. The issue of whether helping the needy and participating in unpaid work should be made compulsory or not is the subject of our discussion. Personally, I'm against work that's forced, because we do good things not just to feel good, but because we know it's the right thing to do and we have the power to make big, beautiful changes. Making a difference in the life of a needy person is very beautiful. Sometimes even the smallest help can save a person's life. Doing a good deed in any situation and in any way that is done by one's individual desire and there is no compulsion in it, creates a very good feeling. We all need a good feeling in life. On the one hand, doing good deeds gives you the opportunity to meet new people and gives you a deeper insight into what is happening in the world. On the other hand, you learn to focus on the cause of the need instead of the need itself, and you learn to eliminate the causes instead of temporarily solving the need. Also, your work can inspire and motivate those around you to follow you and do good things for the reasons they believe in. When unpaid work is forced, especially among young people, they may become stubborn or run away from work. Therefore, these programs create more problems than they solve. Charities will have more work to do in monitoring these young people. In addition, high school students have a lot of academic pressure, so adding these works to their timetable may not be possible, chiefly with students aiming for high academic results. Therefore, creating this type of program may seem challenging. In conclusion, the life of each one of us is a chain that is connected to each other and if one of the links of this chain is broken, eventually there will be problems that will spread from the individual to the population. Therefore, we should all help each other in order to strengthen and connect this chain as well as possible, in the meantime encourage each other to do good deeds.

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علی کاظمی1401/06/02

Every summer we could see volunteer students that are suddenly appear in many community services such as red cross, however this service streams are so limited in my country, a large group of enthusiastic students are desirous to be in a part of this activities. A group of people believe that this unpaid work services required to be compulsory for all of students. However, this thesis in a undeveloped country like Iran wich it infrastructures are not provided for these activities and alot of children in underprivileged families should work to help life expense, are more like a joke or fantasies. In ideal conditions, the proponents argue that this voluntary work leads to the flourishing of empathy and increases children's self-confidence and self-belief, as well as child is taught the basic skills that cannot be fully learned in school, during these activities. On the other hand opponents argue that this kind of services will be destroyed the value of wages against work, which is the basic principle of economy and free trade, in the eyes of children. In addition they raise this issue that the educational system main duty is to prepare students to be effective members of the society and by making voluntary work mandatory for all students, in fact, in addition to the institutions that are legally in charge of public services, the education and training institutions will also become weak and ineffective. Finally it can be concluded that unpaid works for students like voluntary public services, possibly, could be useful for the future life of some students, but making it compulsory for all students is not only useful, but even if all infrastructures are provided, it may have negative consequences.

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علی کاظمی1401/06/05

Every summer we could see volunteer students that suddenly appear in many community services such as red cross, however this service streams are so limited in my country, a large group of enthusiastic students are desirous to be in a part of activities under sizzling weather like delivering free food to the less fortunate or collecting trash from nature. While it still remains a topic of debate weather this activities are wholly beneficial for students, a group of people believe that this unpaid work services required to be compulsory for all of students. However, this thesis in a undeveloped country like Iran wich it infrastructures are not provided for these activities and alot of children in underprivileged families should work to help life expense, are more like a joke or fantasies. In ideal conditions, on one side of argument the proponents believe that this voluntary work leads to the flourishing of empathy and increases children's self-confidence and self-belief, during these activities, child hone various of crucial life skills that cannot be fully learned in school . They can gain insight into the lives of lowest-payed class and therefore this overlook inspire in them a higher scene of responsibility with the community. On the other hand opponents argue that despite the multiple merits of volunteer activities, there are still alot of raised eyebrows. Some people like my father believe this works can sabotage the studies of students because of lack of time. A group of experts believe this kind of services , in the eyes of children, will be destroyed the value of wages against work, which is the basic principle of economy and free trade. In addition they raise this issue that the educational system main duty is to prepare students to be effective members of the society and by making voluntary work mandatory for all students, in fact, in addition to the institutions that are legally in charge of public services, the education and training institutions will also become weak and ineffective. Finally it can be concluded that unpaid works for students like voluntary public services, possibly, could be useful for the future life of some students, but making it compulsory and obligatory to all students is not only useful, but even if all infrastructures are provided, it may have negative consequences.

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