IELTS General Writing Task 1 Practice Test 1

Dear Sir I am Sepid Iravani resident of suite no.7 at Bahar apartment on northern Baharestan. I would like to share some issues with you about this pothole in front of our building. It appears after renovation process of our street. The workers supposed to fix it but they stopped working due to the labor protests. Their protest takes about two weeks but unfortunately no one comes to repair this behemoth hole. We were concerned about our infants security though we need your contribution to interfering and repair it. Make us glad and don't be nonchalant about life quality of Baharestan's citizens. We all are waiting for your response to our request. I would suggest you to take immediate action. We appreciate your support and help. Sincerely yours Sepid Iravani

rRevised: Dear Sir/ Madam I am Sepid Iravani, resident of suite no.7 at Bahar apartment on northern Baharestan. I have some complain to make about this pothole in front of our building. It appears after the street was renovated. The workers were supposed to fix it, but they stopped working due to the labor protests. Their protest took approximately two weeks, but unfortunately, no one comes to repair this behemoth hole. Your interfering and reparing it, could be a bless for us, parents, who are concern about their infants security. I was wondering if you might be able to fix it. Make us glad and don't be nonchalant about life quality of Baharestan's citizens. We all are waiting for your response to our request. I would be deeply indebted if you could implement immediate measures to fill the pothole. We are appreciative of your kind assistance. Sincerely yours. Sepid Iravani.