IELTS General Writing Task 1 Practice Test 12

Dear Sir/Madame I am writing this letter to regarding an article named " Half of the world " published in your newspaper on November 22nd, 2022. I am a resident of Isfahan, I was born and raised in this city. I love everything about my city especially its historical places. I studied arts and art history so I know lots of things about Isfahan. In the article you published last week, you mentioned that Isfahan was capital in Sasanian Empire era. All details was correct except the one about Isfahan being Sasanian's capital. Isfahan was a capital in Safavi's era. It was capital in 3 different era but one of the most important one was Safaviye. Since your newspaper is quite followed and read it daily,  I was thinking it could be a fatal error for your reputation. So you can correct it in your next number of newspaper and also give your readers more information about Safaviye era. Thanks for your time Yours faithfully Sepid Iravani

Revised: Dear Sir/Madame, I am writing this letter to regarding an article named " Half of the world " published in your newspaper on November 22nd, 2022. I am a resident of Isfahan, I was born and raised in this city. I absolutely keen on everything about my city especially its historical places. I studied arts and art history, so I know lots of things about Isfahan. I am not satisfied with your article about Isfahan. In the article you published last week, you mentioned that Isfahan was capital in Sasanian Empire era. All details was correct except the one about Isfahan being Sasanian's capital. Isfahan was a capital in Safavi's era. It was capital at 3 different era but one of the most important one was Safaviye. Since your newspaper is quite followed and read it daily,  I was thinking it could be a fatal error for your reputation. You can correct it in your next number of newspaper and also give your readers more information about Safaviye era. Thanks for your time Yours faithfully, Sepid Iravani